Critique

In this class we all got to look at each others brochures which was helpful to me because I was able to identify areas I was lacking in my design as well as getting good ideas for further development. We also gave each other constructive comments to help each other along in our process. Many of my comments said that my illustrations and overall design suited the topic well which boosted my confidence that what I was doing was on the right track. One suggestion told me that the cover wasn't really working as well as it could be which I completely agree with as it needs improving. Tulia commented that there was a lack of information for parents that would need to use the brochure. This is somewhat relevant as I have not yet sourced the text for my pages, however, from this I did get the idea to highlight key points so it would be easier to spot for people quickly flicking through the book.